Yesterday it was athletics day it was cool we all did long jump. And we all did high jump and we all did . and we did discus and we all did sot put and we had a Rase and then we did house it was fun and we did Relays and we did sprints the end from Shayden.
Kia Ora my name is Chloe King, I like this blog post because of your photo it was really nice. I think maybe next time you could try and put more information also some punctuation?
Also next time you could also add in a video of you racing? Aslo just one last thing could you go back and make the blog post spelling better? Did you have fun making this blog post? Chloe King Yaldhurst Model School
HI shayden my name is Jonathon from yaldhurst school. I like how you have written about your athletics day but can you fix your spelling you really need to fix it. It makes it very hard to read when the spelling is wrong could you next time make sure that your spelling is correct y yours sincrly Jonathon
Hi Shayden, My name is Piper and I am a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School, I like how you have written about your athletics day and the activities you did, Maybe next time you could proofread your post to make sure the spelling is correct and that it makes sense, just to make it easier for other people to read. What was your favourite part of athletics day? Good job on your blog post, Can't wait to read your next! - Piper
Kia Ora my name is Chloe King,
ReplyDeleteI like this blog post because of your photo it was really nice.
I think maybe next time you could try and put more information also some punctuation?
Also next time you could also add in a video of you racing?
Aslo just one last thing could you go back and make the blog post spelling better?
Did you have fun making this blog post?
Chloe King
Yaldhurst Model School
HI shayden my name is Jonathon from yaldhurst school.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have written about your athletics day but can you fix your spelling you really need to fix it.
It makes it very hard to read when the spelling is wrong could you next time make sure that your spelling is correct y
yours sincrly Jonathon
Hi Shayden,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Piper and I am a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School,
I like how you have written about your athletics day and the activities you did,
Maybe next time you could proofread your post to make sure the spelling is correct and that it makes sense, just to make it easier for other people to read.
What was your favourite part of athletics day?
Good job on your blog post, Can't wait to read your next!
- Piper